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Prologues Part 2: Hooks and Bluffs

July 11, 2019 ~ melancholywhale ~ Leave a comment

In part two of this series, we look at how a prologue should be able to draw in and engage readers - without resorting to cheap pyrotechnics.

Prologues Part 1: Making it Relevant

July 3, 2019July 3, 2019 ~ melancholywhale ~ Leave a comment

For aeons, a great battle has waged between They Who Write Prologues and They Who Think the Story Should Start in Chapter One. In this three-part series, we'll look at what a prologue should actually be doing for your story, and help you decide whether you need one or not.

A Quick Conflict Q & A

June 23, 2019 ~ melancholywhale ~ Leave a comment

Asking 'How much conflict should be in my novel?' is a bit like asking 'How much talking should be in my radio play?'

Blandit Attack: five reasons your fight scene is boring

June 19, 2019 ~ melancholywhale ~ Leave a comment

A few common causes of the flaky fight scene, and how to address them.

The Instant Submarine

June 13, 2019 ~ melancholywhale ~ Leave a comment

Playing to your reader's assumptions.

Writing, editing, and the science of making stuff up.

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